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from the window
from the window
in the cold dark before dawn,
water for coffee just beginning
to boil,
frost forms on silhouettes
of nightmare’s dream.
kettle whistles silently
from dusk light kitchen,
dream continues to bleed
a drop at a time on the clean
breakfast floor.
light is breaking fast now,
i see it through the window,
falling on sleeping winter tree limbs--
bleeding dreams of their own,
as i pour scalding water over
ground children of violence,
far from their mountain homes--
bitter black good morning america.
from the window, through the coffee,
a bundled woman walks her morning dog,
tail wagging fiercely.
on the street, cars convey
weekend working stiffs
to dead end jobs.
leonard cohen plays sweetly
in the coffee air of this long, narrow room,
diamond hard frost sharpens the dream,
silhouettes fade to grey, fall from sight,
another day begins.
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
I am a fan. I bow. I am
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
hola
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Ahh. The price we poets pay
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
out on a limb a bird of
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
hola
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Bravo … beautifully writen
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Jayne-Chloe
Atticus
16 years 4 months ago
Victor,
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Nathaniel
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
I am staggered by the eloquence!
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
hola
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
coffee
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
hola
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Patrick,
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Congrates on Spotlight
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Jayne-Chloe,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
“What we do for ourselves
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Victor, click on (your)
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
seabhac
16 years 4 months ago
well done Victor
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Seabhac,
Rob Graber
16 years 4 months ago
Vivid Expression
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Rob,