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from the window

from the window

 

in the cold dark before dawn,

water for coffee just beginning

to boil,

 

frost forms on silhouettes

of nightmare’s dream.

 

kettle whistles silently

from dusk light kitchen,

 

dream continues to bleed

a drop at a time on the clean

breakfast floor.

 

light is breaking fast now,

i see it through the window,

 

falling on sleeping winter tree limbs--

bleeding dreams of their own,

 

as i pour scalding water over

ground children of violence,

far from their mountain homes--

bitter black good morning america.

 

from the window, through the coffee,

a bundled woman walks her morning dog,

tail wagging fiercely.

 

on the street, cars convey

weekend working stiffs

to dead end jobs.

 

leonard cohen plays sweetly

in the coffee air of this long, narrow room,

 

diamond hard frost sharpens the dream,

silhouettes fade to grey, fall from sight,

another day begins.

 

vcp

— Victorclaude, Jan 29, 2010

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Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Wallace Stevens, D. H. Lawrence, Charles Bukowski, Bob Dylan, Leonard Cohen, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Percy Bysshe Shelley, T. S. Eliot, E. E. Cummings, Emily Dickinson, William Butler Yeats, Pablo Neruda, Joni Mitchell, William Shakespeare, Basho, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Kelly Marie Hayner, Susan Wydville. D. Phillip Caron, Elizabeth Bishop.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

I am a fan. I bow. I am

I am a fan. I bow. I am worthy! I am so worthy! Beautiful, awful truth, elegant, masterful! Thank you. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

hola

Kailashana, Thank you so much for your kind remarks. I have so much fun writing that I may be arrested for it some day. Victor Claude
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Ahh. The price we poets pay

Ahh. The price we poets pay for having fun, eh? How else could we have good clean fun for nothing? Smile. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Anna,

I honestly don't know how we could have more fun, Anna. If that is the price, I may just have to pay it, smiling all the while. Victor
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

out on a limb a bird of

out on a limb a bird of paradise peers in the cold breaks the spell and I drift away in somber coffee, grounds for dissolution: a new day! ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
A

Atticus

16 years 4 months ago

Victor,

A magnificant balance between the absolute and a right angled depiction of your subject. "bitter black good morning america" <--------brilliant. Love the work. All the best, Nathaniel
L

Lonnie

16 years 4 months ago

I am staggered by the eloquence!

Kudos, Sir! Your words mesmerize and tantalize, taunt and titillate! Not to be facetious, but could the line, "bitter black good morning America" possibly refer to our president? OOps! Am I bad? Anyways, great, great writing!
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

hola

Lonnie, Because I wrote this piece over thirty years ago it could have nothing to do with our current "president". I hadn't even given any thought to this eventuality, but it is an amusing thought in an acrimonious kind of way. Thank you so much for your kind words. Best, Victor Claude
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

coffee

I was speaking specifically of coffee beans. Many varieties are grown on mountain sides, and they have a life of violence: berries are torn from the plant when ripe, dried, hot-roasted, ground, and then boiling water is poured over them. Sounds pretty brutal to me, but I certainly do love the smell of fresh coffee brewing. Thanks, Victor
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Patrick,

I am pleased that you enjoyed the read. Thank you very much. Victor Claude
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Congrates on Spotlight

Congrates on Spotlight Victor well deserved nice to see some fresh blood in the light love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Jayne-Chloe,

Forgive me, but I have no idea what the spotlight is, or how it works, or where it is, but thank you. Victor
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

“What we do for ourselves

Ohhh. Does that mean it's true what they say about poets? Smile. ~Mum "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Victor, click on (your)

Victor, click on (your) *home* (page) next to your poem's title at the top left. It takes you live to *spotlight*... Others in the venue, either heading towards or away from can be seen by clicking *in the running* (at the bottom of the spotlight section) ... in the moment Jayne's poem holds center stage... That can be subject to change, in moments, minutes, hours and days. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Anna,

Thank you for pointing this out to me. I had no idea that this existed here. Victor
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

16 years 4 months ago

Vivid Expression

I enjoyed this stark getting-up poem; curious about the violent lives of coffee beans, I found your reply enlightening. Who said one could not or should not identify with a coffee bean? :-,?
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Rob,

"Who said one could not or should not identify with a coffee bean?" So many questions about this and that, but are we asking the right ones? (another question) Wish we could scrape away the muck and identify with ourselves -- not really too much to ask is it? (yet another query) and on, and on, and on, and on, ad infinitum . . . Thanks for the read. Best, Victor