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Thoughts in Abyss

I am a heart a soul a passion a burning desire that yearns beneathe the surface to break free rise again.
I seek more than wat is more than wat is to be.

Am i not more than the words i speak the air i breathe the heart that beats.

I break the surface to find that those who see me above the surface recoil and shy away.
I am more than what you see i am a soul a life an eternity of thought.

Seeking for truth understanding a place i am able to call my own.
But for now i will sink back down and there i will remain with my thoughts my yearnings my very being to wait
....to wait for another day i am seen for what exists and not what is seen.
— TruTh sE3ka, Jan 23, 2010

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Nothing wrong here

In your write of despair please know I care you shine above I send you love do not apologize for no par to thee your point and poem is good to me,,thoughts in abyss..sent with a kiss.. Mona
TruTh sE3ka

TruTh sE3ka

16 years 4 months ago

Mona

I dont truly know how to take your words literal poetic license metaphoricaly if you would not mind clearifying it with me at some time if you would like contact me on my new email [email protected] Warm regards from the soul seeking truth and a place to call my own Sheldon