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Jan 03, 2010
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Wind chimes in the garden
Shall we both go and get drunk
And I can put some records on
Then if you would like us to
We can both just sing along
I will dedicate this song to you
Northern Uproars 'A girl I once knew'
"Oh, sing it again, will you sing it again
From beginning right to the end"
Let's go listen to the wind chimes in the garden
Did you show me a loving sign, oh, beg your pardon.
Darling, may I have this one dance
Shall I swing you round and round
We dance like two seven year olds
Having fun back in the old playground
I will make sure I won't drop you
I promise that will always be true
"promise me again, will you promise me again
Like you would as childhood friends"
Let's go listen to the wind chimes in the garden
Did you show me a loving sign, oh, beg your pardon
You'll leave me sat on the bench
My kness tucked up under my chin
I know our time is running out
I try to hold my sorrow in
So tell me did you have a good night
If we should kiss, would that not be right?
Can I taste you, oh let me taste you
Please, before this night's through
Let's go listen to the wind chimes in the garden
Did you show me a loving sign, oh beg your pardon
As you asked so nicely I will sing just one more
Then you can leave me behind and close the door
And I can put some records on
Then if you would like us to
We can both just sing along
I will dedicate this song to you
Northern Uproars 'A girl I once knew'
"Oh, sing it again, will you sing it again
From beginning right to the end"
Let's go listen to the wind chimes in the garden
Did you show me a loving sign, oh, beg your pardon.
Darling, may I have this one dance
Shall I swing you round and round
We dance like two seven year olds
Having fun back in the old playground
I will make sure I won't drop you
I promise that will always be true
"promise me again, will you promise me again
Like you would as childhood friends"
Let's go listen to the wind chimes in the garden
Did you show me a loving sign, oh, beg your pardon
You'll leave me sat on the bench
My kness tucked up under my chin
I know our time is running out
I try to hold my sorrow in
So tell me did you have a good night
If we should kiss, would that not be right?
Can I taste you, oh let me taste you
Please, before this night's through
Let's go listen to the wind chimes in the garden
Did you show me a loving sign, oh beg your pardon
As you asked so nicely I will sing just one more
Then you can leave me behind and close the door
— Millage, Jan 03, 2010
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magics02
16 years 5 months ago
Loved this
Millage
16 years 5 months ago
I sincerely thank you...
Arrow
16 years 4 months ago
Ouch.
Millage
16 years 4 months ago
I appreciate your comments...
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Just chiming in here..not attacking in no means or ways...
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
The wind, the garden the chime,,the dance...
Millage
16 years 4 months ago
Too kind....
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
My chap