In the hands of God

love hubby xoxox cant believe you wrote that

This is beyond commenting, it is you soaring above in the blue heavens as we watch from below, breathless and admiring the sheer beauty of your flight, if there be such a God, then he it was that gave you those mended wings, and will keep on doing so, long may you decorate the skies of our minds with your lovely poems dearest Jayne. A beautiful song I sing to you in my mind, this is special, and so are you, Ann.

Much enjoyed and as I read this it was if I was narrating. It is really a well written fantasy ride. Glad to be a part of it. Love Lyz. XX

(((((((((Snake)))))))) I love you especially for loving JC enough to prove to her how lovable she is. Funny how that works. (((((((((Jayne)))))))) A befitting love poem of thanks to Snake. Mum

...your imagery, which was so very eloquently described. Oh ! But, there's two "r's", in scarred. Otherwise, bloody-right, nice job ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

Seren Just three words on this for you. Beautiful as yourself. magics02

poetry with verve and flash Beautiful Pic seren crop balance tone like this poem beautiful uhh what I mean is that its well Beautiful and powerful Okay I have to go now Thank You !!!!!!!!!!

You and the other ladies here, have inspired another poem, which I will write and post as soon as. Your devotion to the purpose of letting your mate know how much you adore him is so warming, that I have forgotten how cold it is outside. I am all warm and fuzzy inside! Likening his love for you as a thunder storm that lifts you on mended wings to soar as he watches is beautiful to say the least! May the new year find you soaring and gliding as never before. Happy New Year and Love and huggles, ~ Gee

How you do when you are ninety, Hope you are just as sexy, LOL and in love as you are now. I see it because it is so plain. Wish that everyone could find what we have found. I always knew that I would have what I have now. I am not sorry that I had to try it three times. {my three sons} Then too, it has given me such an appreciation for what I have now. I suspect that you will get to try many times to say how much you love your man, in many different ways. That means we will have that much more beautiful work from you. Long live Love! Higgest bugs and lotta love, ~ Gee

What a fitting tribute for me to use lines from on this day - my anniversary! THanks for the inspiration as ever! Best role model (nah! make that AVATAR model;) on Neopoet! Luv ya Boni

I just read all the comments: Great poem, great comments, great love story! Yours, Deelilah PS Yes, the pic is good. The crop looks as if you intended it. That's how the professionals do it.

I have one word for poems like this... A-W-E-Some! Time flows strangely when in such poigent moments... spinning at supersonic speed and then suddenly slowing down to seconds lasting hours. It makes the heart skip a beat and leaves you temporarily breathless... and then as you stated the proton and neutron become fused as an atom's nucleus and that electron spins around inadvertantly helping the flow of electrons through the system that seems to kick start the heart and lungs similtaneously until that levin unleashed... and the whole world turns to great the rolling thunder that ensues... You make everyone take notice of your skilled pen which is dipped in the ink of your heart and etched in love's blood here. Simply stunning! Dale :)

Without descending to trite sentimentality. Adore your works. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Still can't find the words to do it justice. Bloody Brilliant do?

Congratulations on finding your voice, and the heart of your words. Cherish every blade of grass, and every moment that it grows. B This is the finest work that you have ever done ,and the finest poem I have ever read.It will hold the tears of your childrens children to all their generations, and may God bless you, and guide you in all you put your hand to do.