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Halloween

Carnivorous clouds devour the sky
bourne by a burgeoning breeze
wantonly Witch-Women flitter and fly
through tangles of terrible trees

Gargoyles are growling,  Hell-Hounds are howling,
Demons in deadly disguise
galloping Ghosts and horrible hosts
of dastardly Dead-things arise

I shudder and shiver,  my limbs are a-quiver,
with fear from the fluttering wings
of vicious Vampires' Unholy desires
and other,  more ominous things

The Moon up in space wears a sinister face
and shines on a slithering sea
of blood-sucking beasts that ferociously feast
on cowering creatures like me

Still,  not to worry,  it's gone in a hurry,
the morning will dawn bright and green
but just for tonight,  you'll be fainting in fright,
for it's once again Halloween!

C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
— Lonnie, Oct 31, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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Rett

Rett

16 years 7 months ago

wow!!!!

AWESOME! Y did a fantastic job on both subject and form! I know this form is difficult because i use it once in awhile! Respectfully, Rett: "You can fool some of the people all of the time, all of the people some of the time, but you can't fool all the people all the time" Abraham Lincoln..Now, if our government would really learn that.
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Lonnie

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks Rett!

I just had to do something for Fright Night! LOL!!!
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

I think I just did

faint, lol. Awesome and flowed well and strong. Hope your Halloween was not as scary. Enjoyed it immensely. Love to you and yours, Lyz. Xx
hugo la rosa

hugo la rosa

16 years 7 months ago

Wonderful poem!

The poem is really enthralling, it's really out of this world! Excellent!!! You are getting better as a poet by the minute! Thank you for sharing. I'm glad I read it. Sincerely, Hugo
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Lonnie

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks, Hugo!

It's about time I started getting better, I've been at it for quite a few years now! LOL!!!
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Lonnie

what a wonderfully rich halloween poem ... thank you for sharing ... love and big hugs Jayne x x x
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Lonnie

16 years 7 months ago

Many thanks, Jayne!

This was a Devil of a form to work with! Think I'll not tackle that kind again for a while! Glad you liked it!
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

16 years 7 months ago

Halloween

_Lonnie, thank you for sharing this spooky tribute, I enjoyed it! Halloween is one of my favorite holidays. _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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Lonnie

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you, Janice!

This was a fun one to write, but very tough also! Glad you liked it!
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poewriter58

16 years 7 months ago

Bear

So glad ours wasn't as the one you wrote about. As always great rhyme and form. You need to write something I can correct since I seem to be taking up space here and not earning my keep. Love ya Me
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Lonnie

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you, Dear!

Yeah, we had a nice, quiet Halloween, didn't we? Just you and I and the Jack-'O-Lantern! (and Princess too, of course) LOL!!!
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 7 months ago

*falls over*

First, kudos on such a tough form. I'm quite the alliteration junkie, and that part of me did a happy dance. I especially like this stanza: "Gargoyles are growling, Hell-Hounds are howling, Demons in deadly disguise galloping Ghosts and horrible hosts of dastardly Dead-things arise" - because it reminds me of the gravestone on Farmville that oozes out a ghost every couple of seconds. Are the deadly disguised demons kids in costumes? ~Jess K. ----------------------- "There was no promise made, the part you played, the chance you took. There's no way out of here, when you come in you're in for good." - David Gilmour
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Lonnie

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you kind Lady!

It is a very tight form to write in and I'm not really that good at it, but I did my best! Glad you liked it, Jess!