In search of peace

Cried day and night,
Struggle leading each second in life,
Got spilled into my dreams,
My heart could never cry out loud,
Nor it could ever speak out a word,
With days passing.. yet,
My heart and soul awaits..,
In search of peace..

— Poem, Oct 28, 2009

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Region, Country: Karnataka, IND

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Lovely little piece about

Lovely little piece about peace. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

Lovely, kavita,

The way you carefully structure this is like an elegant flower arrangement, with thorns. Why the quotation marks? Some small editing suggestions- Cried day and night, Struggle leading each second in life, Got spilled into my dreams, Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible