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Oct 25, 2009
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Malovelent Messiah
Behold the angry anthropoid
hear him bark and growl
see him dripping gobs of foam
from his unshaven jowl
Is his demeanor any less
than what a God's should be?
does he forego the priviledge
of dying to be free?
Does he forage history
for postulants who'll pray
to any shape that feeds their needs
and sings their pain away?
Or, is his odd divinity
more rigid and unreal,
his unrelenting warlike words
too honest in their zeal?
Flaccid man-things call him Lord
and congregate within
their darkened dens of servitude
to worship and to sin
and all the wretched pestilence
he struggles to control
erupts with demon frenzy
from the Evil of his soul
C. Lon R. Bruso
hear him bark and growl
see him dripping gobs of foam
from his unshaven jowl
Is his demeanor any less
than what a God's should be?
does he forego the priviledge
of dying to be free?
Does he forage history
for postulants who'll pray
to any shape that feeds their needs
and sings their pain away?
Or, is his odd divinity
more rigid and unreal,
his unrelenting warlike words
too honest in their zeal?
Flaccid man-things call him Lord
and congregate within
their darkened dens of servitude
to worship and to sin
and all the wretched pestilence
he struggles to control
erupts with demon frenzy
from the Evil of his soul
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Oct 25, 2009
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lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Much appreciated, Lyz!
themoonman
16 years 7 months ago
Lonnie...
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you, Richard!
yenti
16 years 7 months ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks so much, Ian!
yenti
16 years 7 months ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks again, my friend!
Hooded Stranger
16 years 7 months ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
My deepest thanks, Sir!
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
When a poet writes with
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you kind Lady!
poewriter58
16 years 7 months ago
Bear
yenti
16 years 7 months ago
Me and You
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
OOPS! Got yours and Chry's replies reversed!
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Is that the ONLY reason, M'Dear?