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Image Woven Words

Image woven words,Flowing through this prose and rhyme.Like a virus, infecting my mind.From this, is there transcendence?
— Ailill, Oct 24, 2009

Critiques

themoonman

themoonman

16 years 8 months ago

Ailill...

I am a big fan of the short and powerful... this poem leaves one in wonderment... always a success in my view! Welcome to the site, I see you've submitted a few already but this is the first one I've read... thank you for the read! Richard
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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Yes I also agree with our moonman here

I also like the short and powerful in the words of this lovely one write of yours, and I shall be back for more to visit with you, Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

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