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The Very End of Never Street (P.S. I Love You)

It's better to have loved and lost
than never loved at all
but if you've loved
and lost
what chance you got
to ever love again?

You see, I've read the book
I've seen the film
but life aint like a movie screen
it's a silent scream
when all I want's the old way
just give me the cliche or
leave me alone

There's plenty more fish
in the sea
but hey, I just can't swim
like I used to
I'm used up
from still loving you
I'm flogging  a dead horse
You were my lobster
(they mate for life, apparently)
and lobster's off the menu

Put me to bed
and tuck me up with a dream
Love, truth and
romance, bursting it's seams
fuck me
like tomorrow might never come
shower me with promises
meaning every one
find the girl in me who went a-walking
stay up with me all night talking
only parting when the rainbows meet
at the very end of Never Street

Make me laugh 'til my belly aches
look me in the eye
so my heart breaks
shattering into pieces of joy
Oh Boy
find me another you
with real ears I can whisper into
with actual hands I can high five
fingers to point out the beauty of just being alive
breathing, teasing, playing, staying
hold me 'til the cold subsides
abide with me
until he arrives

Let him be laden with longing
brimming with hope
grant me the scope
to welcome him
in, somewhere only you have been
let me go, so he might see
whatever it was you worshipped in me


Ok, show me a new way
of bending
bring me the Hollywood ending
yes, a new way, a new day
but still drenched in the cliche
— faerybeki, Sep 01, 2009

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orgami

16 years 9 months ago

I can see you onstage reciting this in your "accent"

I think of the West here in America the movies the photos the raw towns that brought in talent shows and Operas Orators on stage in lamp light bringing the far east Poetry mystics and other This poem rocks I stayed with it calmed by Barbara Writes poem and then livened up by your write such passion and honest utterance such kindness still Bravo!!!
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 9 months ago

Funny you picture me on

Funny you picture me on stage, I belong to an amateur dramatics group, I love acting almost as much as I love writing, haven't done much since having Omi but I've been feeling a strong pull to tread the boards again. So happy you stayed with this one Steven, I was worried it might be a bit long. Glad it enlivened you, I guess there's some sadness here but I was hoping it might be read quite quickly and a sense of play may be detected as well, maybe. :) Loving your new pic, is it one of yours? or Chloes? Hoping you're well. Much love Beki xx
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 9 months ago

Faerybeki

This is fabulous! It's fable and yet it's real! It's every school girls dream and fear - finding and losing one so special! Loved the descriptions - right out of a Hollywood movie. "Here's lookin at you kid!" lol Brilliant! Boni
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 9 months ago

Boni, thanks for taking time

Boni, thanks for taking time to comment, glad you enjoyed the poem. Your reaction is just what I hoped for. I seem to exist in a state of fable merged with reality, I often wonder if it's good for me lol and I've watched far too many movies and perhaps am prone to romanticising (that one lost love in particular), maybe it leads me to be a tad unrealistic in my expectations more lol. I digress...thanks again Boni, much love Beki xx
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Beki

P.S I Love You ... and your poem ... what more can I say this is poetry .. love and hugz Jayne nighters 4am I am off to bed lol "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 9 months ago

Love you too Jayne :) God

Love you too Jayne :) God girl 4am! Shouldn't you be taking it easy ;) HOpe you had a good time with the boys ;) You home now? bet the kids were pleased to see you. Take good care of yourself hon. Omi with her Dad today but I did have little dance by myself lol, Paulo Nutini 10/10 always gets me on my feet :) Thinking of you, much love and HUGS Beki xxx
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Depth

Very meaningful, a lot of depth, sad, a lot of emotions. Loved it. Lyz.
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 9 months ago

HI Lyz, thanks for taking

HI Lyz, thanks for taking time to comment, so happy you enjoyed the poem, it came out of emotion, I'm terrible for weepy, romantic movies, I wrote this one after watching Ps I love You (hence the title) and crying lots lol. Much love Beki xxx