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HONEY

            She said" time 
             is money and 
               and i will be 
            your honey "and 
                   love not 
            mentioned at all 
           
            Got a rocket in my 
            pocket and honey 
           was ready for more 

            And after a while it 
           all ends with a smile 
           honey may now ask 
                 you to leave ,
             
          Because honey has your 
          money and you may be 
           back to give her more .


— ziggy, Sep 01, 2009

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 9 months ago

a swift transaction indeed!

Hello ZIggy! How uncomplicated you make it all sound! Perhaps if we were to simply pay for love "honey" it would be... but then again - some things are priceless and/or have to be paid for with blood,sweat & tears. Enjoyed the write... Bonita j
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

honey

enda, patrick collins. hi there , lol this not based on any experience of mine i just wanted to write something funny for a change thanks for the read and vote YOURS ZIGGYYYYYYYY
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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

You dirty boy

Bought a smile to my face, silly pro, how could she not give you a little longer with those lovely Irish eyes. Lol. Whoops, sorry,only a poem? Ha!. Bloody enjoyed this. I needed a smile. Lyz x
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ziggy

16 years 9 months ago

who me

enda, patrick collins. morning lyz ah how nice to wake up to "WHEN IRISH EYES ARE SMILING SURE THEY MELT YOUR HEART AWAY " LOL LOL HA THANK YOU SO MUCH BUDD I JUST GOT A BIT BORED WITH SERIOUS POETRY GLAD IT MADE YOU LAUGH THATS WHAT ITS FOR NICE ONE LYZ X