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The best dressed in the whole Universe
Your beauty is beyond compare
the warming sun
loves holding you in its embrace,
The aqua blues that gently strokes your feet
with the cool waters
that refreshes and invigorates,
Your attire is of such fine fair
for the metamorphoses of the four seasons
in everything you wear,
Winter,
wrapped in your white virgin garment
your purity is there for all to see,
Spring,
brings out your lovely soothing greens
blending perfectly with all your accessories,
Summer,
dances with its warmth upon your skin
igniting a rainbow of hues
that mingles with all your greens,
Fall,
this is your favorite of all
the earth tone scarfs and sweaters that you wear
calm and subdue deep inside your soul,
Is there anyone else in the whole universe
that has your sense of style?
I think not,
I’ve always loved
looking upon my well- dress earth
she is the prettiest in the whole Universe.
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
Wonderful *seasonal* love
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 8 months ago
just returned to reality
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Eddie
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
Eddie, my heart goes out to
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
bravo, well done, a lovely love poem to our poor old world so ta
Cloudthings
16 years 8 months ago
I am so sorry to hear of this & to know your suffering
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Eddie:
themoonman
16 years 8 months ago
Eddie...
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you to all!!