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Jul 19, 2009
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On Jack Daniels and Lab Reports
Ice-white smoky tendrils
drift from chilled cylindrical vessel
filled with pale pink
alcoholic goodness
I shall imbibe slowly
thus savouring
its silky smoothness
Releasing the brain's sphincter
words pour forth on a page
formulas and mechanisms
work together grudgingly
to turn out final solutions
from tedious calculations
It is at this stage
where my mind tends to wander
and the retraction setting on its leash breaks
as thoughts drift to a friend
to my husband
and jealous-like gaze at the cat
who lies in slumber in the sunbeam
And I find
that all is right in my little world
for now.....
drift from chilled cylindrical vessel
filled with pale pink
alcoholic goodness
I shall imbibe slowly
thus savouring
its silky smoothness
Releasing the brain's sphincter
words pour forth on a page
formulas and mechanisms
work together grudgingly
to turn out final solutions
from tedious calculations
It is at this stage
where my mind tends to wander
and the retraction setting on its leash breaks
as thoughts drift to a friend
to my husband
and jealous-like gaze at the cat
who lies in slumber in the sunbeam
And I find
that all is right in my little world
for now.....
— infinite_dwarf, Jul 19, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
16 years 10 months ago
Good point...
Quillsvein1
16 years 10 months ago
excellent imagery
bjp
16 years 10 months ago
Dear Jessica,