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Life Patterns (the Wave)

 

                                        up
                                      s    a
                                    e         n
                                 o               d             
                              g                                                s   a 
                           e                          d                    k       n
                         f                                o              a            d
Sometimes li                                    w        e                                                    d   d
                                                               n, p                        t                             n      o
                                                                                                r                        a          w
                                                                                                  o                   p                n
                                                                                                      u            u                       .
                                                                                                         g h s ,                             .
                                                                                                                                                     .

— faerybeki, Jul 11, 2009

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Ink Dragon

16 years 11 months ago

Beki,

this is such a great idea! Please take a look again, I think it may have shifted because of your pic (poems tend to do that here). Love, ~Nina
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 11 months ago

Nina, oh dear, it looked ok

Nina, oh dear, it looked ok to me from my end, is it not working for you? Let me go investigate lol, happy you like the idea :) much love Beks x
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Ink Dragon

16 years 11 months ago

It's the pic,

when I was previewing my comment I could see the poem without the pic, and see how it is supposed to look. Maybe smaller letters would help? Much love, and good luck with the edit, ~Nina
Seren

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

I love this idea Beki !!

And I think it looks wonderful ... I have been playing with one myself LOL though with little luck yet LOL (hug) love Jayne x x
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 10 months ago

….So it looks ok to Jayne

....So it looks ok to Jayne (thanks hon, hugs) and it's looking as I intended to me.. Nina are you still missing some? Not sure how to/if I can edit when it looks ok my end!! Happy you both like the 'idea' of what's shaping up to be a series of Life Patterns poems ;) much love to you both Beks xx
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Ah, Beki,

maybe it's my browser! I will check out how it looks when I use another browser! Much love, ~Nina
Rett

Rett

16 years 10 months ago

Beki

I like it although it is a little off by the pic. The problem with that is the only real way to cure it is to go below the pic to post. It still comes though very well though! Interesting. . Respectfully, Rett: "At twenty, if you are not a liberal, you have no heart. At thirty, if you are not a conservative, you have no brain." Winston Churchill
faerybeki

faerybeki

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks guys, must admit this

Thanks guys, must admit this is bit frustrating, wish I could see what you're both saying about it being off by pic, I've tried logging out and looking at it when it was in stream but it still looked how I intended lol :) Can you alter font size on Neo editing page, or should I perhaps change it in Notepad before I transfer it over? Thanks for the comments, and happy you find it an interesting concept, much love to all, Beki xx
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Beki,

it looks ok when viewed with firefox, but not when viewed with IE. Which browser are you using? Much love, ~Nina
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Beats me!

No clever ideas left. (Assuming any of my ideas were clever.) Much love, ~Nina