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Jun 19, 2009
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The bed is a world between us.
You turn to face the wall and I
face the door.
The polite "good mornings"
are all well and said, harsh
whispers at the early dawn.
You make your coffee
and stroll to the deck,
these days I don't
even ask for a cup.
The routine has set in
like a black cloud in this
old house. I don't ask
for much.
A rare touch is all that
is shared, a tender moment
that is thoughtless and
mournful.
You don't notice the
boxes near the room,
empty now, but waiting
for treasure.
A plane ticket on the counter
doesn't seem to phase you,
near the keys that I left for
you.
No need for letters and notes
you won't even notice when
I am gone.
— dina grey, Jun 19, 2009
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Seren
16 years 11 months ago
Awwwww Dina
dina grey
16 years 11 months ago
Thanks
themoonman
16 years 11 months ago
Hi Dina...
dina grey
16 years 11 months ago
So true
Craig Norris
16 years 11 months ago
very nicely caught
dina grey
16 years 11 months ago
Hollow cup