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May 22, 2009
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Last stop to nowhere
Last stop to nowhere, Tranquil tears flow from my eyeswhile the rainbows are dancing in an ancient prisms afterglow. Soaring over the winds crest withcoy whisperings of sweet nothings. Devoted to relish each momentas I lay upon my bed of roses,my pain only recognized in my dreams.Carrying walls the size of mountainsUnder mined and threatening to collapse.. So deeply I inhale the scent of the sunas it rolls over my flesh.A Silent nectar offered to all equally.Such a force of nature freely given, ignorantly lost. Many choices made but lost in the kaleidoscope cascading a rhythm to follow.Drawing visions of the flora and fauna.So delicately Sprung from a well of longing, begging someone to quench my thirst. Julie D.D. 5-22-09
— DawningDaytripper, May 22, 2009
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yenti
17 years ago
Nowhere
Geezer
17 years ago
Think you,me...
Rett
17 years ago
Ditto what Ian said Julie
Mark
17 years ago
Er..