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Your eyes

Yes, I love to live in your eyes
those two sparkling gems make me desire
How I wish I could live in them forever
because when you look into my eyes,
there is no need of words
Your eyes say it all, and this, I really enjoy.

Your eyes are like clear water
and in them I see you and me
holding hands and standing still
There is so much to say but
I forget everything when my eyes meet yours.

Then we talk. Talk in such a way
that no one else knows what we say
As that is our world, with no one else but us
Out of the world yet so much into it
we are- just you and me.
— Samaira, May 02, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

"Drink to me only"

This is a lovely thought and story and poem and love. I can see you both and feel with you your sensations, very nice Samaira. Yours Ann of Norway
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Samaira

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you

Dear Ann, Thanks for the encouraging words. They mean a lot to a budding writer like me. Looking forward to read and write more. Regards Samaira.
W

Wafi

17 years 1 month ago

Samaira

Samaira, I really enjoyed this poem, this is sweet. Specially the last stanza, I enjoyed it a lot. "we talk in such a way That no one else knows what we say As that is our world, with no one else but us Out of the world yet so much into it we are- just you and me." Beautiful! I liked the way you express your feelings. Sincerely, Wafi
S

Samaira

17 years 1 month ago

Hello Wafi

The encouragement coming from a good writer like you adds to the happy feeling. Thank you for your kind words. Cheers Samaira.
yenti

yenti

17 years 1 month ago

Samaira.

A quiet lovely poem that shows that you have a soul mate, if the words are reflected true then you have something very special. Take care to look past the eyes, and if you do and the reply is the same then you will be very happy there, you take care, Yours Ian.T
TC

TJ Curtis

17 years ago

Love, such a strong word.

Love, such a strong word. The way you described the way you love to live in his eyes is so metaphoric. Like your the only one in his eyes no matter what other girl goes by, he only has love for you. This poem is such a great love story. Sincerely, TJ Curtis
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Samaira

17 years ago

Thanks..

Thank you for your appreciation. I am glad that you could see the meaning of the poem. I am looking forward to read more from you. Cheers Samaira