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Symposium of Song

In these shards
of your souls
I recognise
a piece of my own
a home, a harbour
a heavenly haven
of wisdom, in words

In this symphony
of synergy
I hear echoes
of my own voice
philosophical musings
crashing revelations
deep movement
through symposium of song

Within this energy
of empathy
each recognition
a reality, entreating
compassionate reaction

Within these
hopeful hello's
gentle letting go's
such aching
beauty dwells

What untold treasure
still hides untouched
to encourage
the growth of love

meaning
constantly
evolving

I sharpen my skills
on the anvil
of your inspiration

I thank you
with these
insufficient words
 
— faerybeki, Apr 28, 2009

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Dylan

17 years 1 month ago

‘In these shards of your

'In these shards of your souls I recognize a piece of my own' The best line i have heard for a long time, i really like that, really liked it. Some nicely tuned expressions such as 'energy of empathy' and 'symphony of synergy.' The poem itself provided a great read and evoked a lot of thoughts.
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Thank you Dylan for reading

Thank you Dylan for reading and taking time to comment. So glad you liked the poem, I see you are one of those poets I have yet to discover and will make time to read you soon. thanks again, always pleased to have a poem evoke a lot of thoughts :) much love b x
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 1 month ago

Oh T, what can I, in return,

Oh T, what can I, in return, say to that?! thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it, I think you were one of the first I read here! I see you have a new post, will check it out soon. much love b x