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Apr 08, 2009
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Wounded Knees
Here I am on wounded knees
the wailing walls close in on me
I pray for sweet recovery
to wash me clean
These knees which are so etched with scars
from love's mirror, shattered far
reflecting only glass like shards
of good intention
Worn hands held closely to my chest
I'm out of focus, and the rest
of me remembers still, lest
I forget
These hands so ageing and so dry
ever willing me to try
to open them despite the lies
that love may bring
Swollen sight for hope still looks
what chapter next, within this book
I am love's worm upon a hook
content to be caught
These eyes so deep, so brown, so pained
see through the world, beauty remains
within this one whom love ordained
to look for it
Standing on a precipice
tinged with approaching darkness
I walk the tightening ropiness
of insecurity
These feet so battered and so bruised
so unkempt, so over used
may lead me to a place of truth
and inspiration
the wailing walls close in on me
I pray for sweet recovery
to wash me clean
These knees which are so etched with scars
from love's mirror, shattered far
reflecting only glass like shards
of good intention
Worn hands held closely to my chest
I'm out of focus, and the rest
of me remembers still, lest
I forget
These hands so ageing and so dry
ever willing me to try
to open them despite the lies
that love may bring
Swollen sight for hope still looks
what chapter next, within this book
I am love's worm upon a hook
content to be caught
These eyes so deep, so brown, so pained
see through the world, beauty remains
within this one whom love ordained
to look for it
Standing on a precipice
tinged with approaching darkness
I walk the tightening ropiness
of insecurity
These feet so battered and so bruised
so unkempt, so over used
may lead me to a place of truth
and inspiration
— faerybeki, Apr 08, 2009
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yenti
17 years 2 months ago
Faerybeki
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
Ian, thank you for reading
Ink Dragon
17 years 2 months ago
Dear Beki,
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Nina, thanks for reading,
Craig Norris
17 years 1 month ago
don't bury your heart on wounded knees..
faerybeki
17 years 1 month ago
Hi Craig, thanks for your