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a dozen white roses...

 A dozen white roseshow beautiful they are;they fill the small roomwith ethereal joy.And when they slowly fade away,the spirit, the hope, the life, the joywill forever stay.
There will be smiles, there will be tears,but the feelings, the sentiments, the lovewill always be just as magicas the dozen white roses...
— dsaranti, Mar 11, 2009

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poewriter58

17 years 2 months ago

Dsaranti

suggestion after the first "the" leave out the other the spirit , life,hope,and joy I would suggest just as magical instead of magic Chrys