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infinite_dwarf

Mar 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Amoeba ( a haiku)

Phagocytosis
I cover you completely
burp, smack, you are mine....

— infinite_dwarf, Mar 05, 2009

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Critiques

17 years 3 months ago

Biology

Phagocytes keep on munching. I didn't mind biology, but I detested microbiology, can't say I learned much from it other than wash your hands, and if it's wet and not yours, don't touch it.

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poewriter58

17 years 2 months ago

Jess

Interesting. I'd say Biology is getting to you Mom

17 years 2 months ago

Fast food restureants....

...are much the same. People keep on munching, but can never get full. That's probably because of the "empty calories"...what's empty from this poem is, the direction or purpose. I realize this is but a haiku, but not liking biology does not make this a poem. Sorry, but in keeping true to what I said to the poet that rambled on about God in his 3 forms, all in capital letters..."ranting" does not a poem, make. Just keepin' things "real". Forgive my bluntness? #{:>{]@===== docmaverick.