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You're..

You're a mountaineer
and you've conquered
the realms of my heart.

You're a pioneer
going everywhere
you've never been before.

You're a cartographer
mapping the world
all around you.

You're impossibly beautiful
such light and such life,
you're my baby, my daughter
the joy and the meaning for me.

I'll love you, forever.

(June 08)
— faerybeki, Feb 26, 2009

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 3 months ago

A mother's love...

is expressed in 'You're' the best of everything. This beautiful piece brings home the joy of motherhood. Best wishes. T.
faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

thankyou for your kind

thankyou for your kind comment!! am new to this site and still finding my way around!! Becoming a mum has given me a whole new source of (happy) inspiration for my poetry!! best wishes back xx