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Ode to Spanish Harlem

Rainbows cascading on
asphalt from plumes of
droplets,

Congas playing a simple
penetrating rhythm, salsa
in the air dancing in the
street,

Skin tones that go from
white to black and every
shade in between,

Ivory's colliding into each
other, while old men speak
politics,

Eyes hidden behind floral
curtains, as the intruders of
life come with their flashing
lights,

Arroz con huevos frito's,
breakfast delight,
Arroz con leche, the poor
man's steak,

Running manhole to manhole,
while cars come down the
street,

My heart is Puerto Rican,
but I,
I live Newyorican!



— Eduardo Cruz, Dec 28, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Eddie,

this is such a sweet tribute to your home! (Did I ever tell you that my father-in-law is Spanish?) I enjoyed the little Spanish lines...Two minor spots there: I may be wrong, because my Spanish is far from fluent, but isn´t it "arroz"? And the "mans" seems to yearn for an apostrophe... The first five stanzas are wonderful, you pile image upon image! I almost see and hear and smell the things you describe, ID
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

ID,

your right it is Arroz, I have run away fingers. They really thing they can do as they please. I'm loss on the "mans" your talking about, according to spell check it is correct (mans = many,// man's = man is) I had to check to be sure. I glad you enjoyed it, and could see the imagery! thanks for the read and correcting where it was needed. Eddie
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Eddie,

I thought you were referring to a genitive here? Did you not mean that this kind of breakfast belongs to a poor man (which would need an apostrophe, like "poor man´s breakfast")? If not, I do apologize... ID
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

ID,

It's referring to a dinner meal rice cooked in milk, that the poor ate when there was nothing else in the 40's, 50's and 60's, as a matter of fact they called it steak. Today it is considered a delicacy, in memory of all the hardship the people went through at that time, so it's about the many people who suffered men, women, and children. I hope this helps? thanks again. Eddie
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Eddie,

the question you would have to ask yourself considering the adding of the apostrophe is: Would you say of the poor man that HIS breakfast is milk rice? If you can answer that question with "yes", you need the apostrophe... Hope this helps, ID
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

ID,

the answer is yes! You are relentless, and I love that about you so I concede to your point. thanks you so much for returning to make you point, excellent argument on your part. Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Eddie,

you´re most welcome. Most of the times when someone does not see my point I have to admit that I did not phrase it unambiguously enough, so I keep trying to get the message across... Funny thing about this apostrophe is that I´ve recently read a book that claimed non-native speakers who teach English knew the most about apostrophes in English... Cheers, ID
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

My Dear Janice,

thank you so much for the "wonderful". I'm happy to hear from you, I hope you and the kids had a wonderful Christmas!! Happy New years to you and yours also!! thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 4 months ago

Janice,

that's wonderful!! I'm sure she will, and it will also bring you pleasure! thank God for the simple things in life that we sometimes forget. Like seeing the world through the eyes of a child. All my love, Eddie "to see the kingdom you must become like a child" By Jesus Christ
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 5 months ago

Eddie, Eddie, Eddie

This was a great poem. We have Festival in our town and celebrate all the original food and festivities of all nationalities (except the Dutch). I like the salsa, and colorful clothes that the dancers wear. Thanks for bringing that memory back to me from summer. Patty
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

Hey Patty,

What a pleasure it is to hear from you, Sweet Patty Pure Bread!!! where have you been, you constantly pull disappearing acts. I send out a search party, and here you are. But now the search party is lost. LOL! I'm happy you enjoy the salsa dancers. I'm glad I could bring summer in the cold winter! May you have the most wonderful New Year!!!! hey say hello once in a while!! Eddie