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A simple word

A simple word when said
or thought can like rain,
create torrents of words
as in poetry

A word can be as gentle
as a spring breeze that
will refresh, when it is said
filled with love.

A word can devastate and
destroy, when it is fired like
a bullet from a gun.

or  a word said maliciously
can create an avalanche of
words that send forth fire
that can consume,

A word when said does not
end as in death, but rather
takes on a life of its own,

Once a word is released it
will not return without
completing its mission,

the measurement of a word
is like math, it can be added,
subtracted, multiplied, and
divided,

its final sum can affect a
person, a couple, a group,
and a nation,

words are a tool that can
construct and harness
incredible power that is
beyond physical strength,

the pen is most mightier
then the sword, it has a
lasting affect on the psychic
that years of therapy can not
repair,

On a word nations go to war,
on a word alliances are forged,
on a word love is born,
upon a word a life is taken,
upon a word heavenly bliss is
found,

I have lived my life for the love of
words, and I will continue to do
so, because I have come to
realize that no matter how many
words I know I will never know
enough.

Of a simple word!!
 
— Eduardo Cruz, Nov 30, 2008

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Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

A simple word

Eddie, 2nd line "can like rain" doesn't seem to fit, unless you add a comma line 14 fourth should be forth? line 19th release [released] line 44 I have live [lived] my life This is so in-depth and true. blisse [bliss] My favorite stanza; On a word nations go to war on a word alliances are forged on a word love is born upon a word a life is taken upon a word heavenly bliss is found. Great write Eddie! Sorry about all the corrections~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Janice,

Please don't be sorry, you have no idea how much I appreciate it. That is what I love of this site, that other writers can correct my lame brain grammar. thank you so very, very much! Feel free to correct what ever you see, It only helps me in my lazy grammar. thank you for your generous comment, coming from you it mean a lot! Eddie
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 6 months ago

Simple Word poem

E.C., A moving poem for me. Yes, words...so critical. I wonder sometimes how people can say things they say. No thought before speaking? P.S., Good luck perfecting our language for your use. I grew up with it, and I still have to keep it simple. wcw
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

W.C.

that what I tell my children, "think it through before you speak." thanks I appreciate your thoughts and comment Eddie
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie,

This poem is so true! If I remember correctly my history that a war was started maybe with Japan? There was a translator that messed up one word. Then look out. Patty
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Patty,

that exactly what I was referring to, how one wrong word can start a war. Isn't it scary to think. thanks Patty my buddy, for reading! Eddie
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Lonnie

17 years 6 months ago

Great writing, Eddie!

You most assuredly have a way with the very thing you write about! Your poetic passion shines, my friend!
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

WOW Lonnie,

that's very kind of you my friend. Your poetry is much better than mine with your beautiful expression, I wish I had a way as is yours. thanks for your compliment and comment! Eddie
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Found it Eddie

Found this on the internet The U.S dropped the bombs on two cities of Japan was because of a wrong translation. On 28 September 1945, the Japanese Premier said by a news conference that the Ministry would follow the ‘mokusastu policy’. The word ‘mokusastu’ has two meanings. One meaning is ‘ignore’, another meaning is ‘no comment’. At that time the Japanese government was hoping for a nonaggression pact the Soviet Union and the Japanese emperor Hirohito wanted the ministry which was the administrative organization to accept the Potsdam Declaration’s demand. The premier meant ‘the government gives no comment’ also that meant ‘the government think about the surrender’ but even all the Japanese media naturally explained it as ‘ignore’ and Japanese Union reporter also translated the word to ‘ignore’ on the English news paper. No one thought the word’s original meaning was ‘no comment’. Normally hate history, but yes there was a translation error Please lets not start bickering about this poet family, but Eddie brings up a very good point in his poem..... a history lesson. Patty
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Patty,

Its not the history that impress me about you, it's your commitment to research. thanks for coming back with that info, that helps validate my poem. I love it!!! thanks bud!! Eddie
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poewriter58

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie

How very true and YOUR words are ell stated Words are the most powerful weapon we have and your poem has shown your passion for words Chrys
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Chrys,

thank you I do love words, but my hope to state them rightly sometimes is loss to my grammar. I guess you know, you've had to help me with corrections also. But what's important is that most do understand my chicken scratch. thanks for your comment, and stopping by to read! Eddie
Rett

Rett

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie, Very insightful write

And your reference to Japan and the bombs by both you and Patty are entirely correct. I love history and the strength of words. Another tidbit on the history of the War with Japan was that we can thank Yamamoto for Japan not attacking the mainland due to words also. He had went to Harvard and told the powers that be that Americans are very independent and almost everyone has guns and the knowledge to use them. If we attack them we will face guns behind every tree, rock and building and the cost will be extremely high. (not a direct quote as I can't remember the exact words) The power of words is tremendous. It is also the reason for my favorite saying. "Never Piss off a poet!" The poem I'll be posting after while will illustrate that saying well. *G* Excellent write! Respectfully, Rett: "If law abiding citizens are denied guns, the police don't need theirs. After all, the criminals aren't feared, just the law abiding citizens." Rett
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Rett,

you are correct he had fear of the power of the people in the USA. He did make the statement "be careful of waking a sleeping giant" referring to the USA. thanks for the excellent! Eddie "If while I'm drunk I pickup a weapon, those that make me a soldier?"
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

I like that Rett

Never piss off a poet, they will get to thinking and get you good. Like the time I found the vodka bottle in the rafters. Emptied it filled it with water. When the kids were teenagers..... When they started yelling at each other I asked what the problem was... It's ok mom never mind.......... Never piss off a poet.
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Patty,

you sneaky little mouse, you must have laughed for days, did you ever tell them it was you? thanks for coming back, Eddie
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie

When they grew up I told them, they however never told me who's it was. Hope they don't have to use this one. It saved me a confrontation of yelling that never got me anywhere.
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Patty,

I know for sure I'll never use it. I have four children or rather grownups. My oldies is 38 then it's 35, 27 and 19. The 19 year old is off at college. I told the story to my 27 year old , who's name is Denise. She hopes she doesn't have to use it on my grandchildren. Patty by the way I have nine (9) grandchildren. It's still one of the funniest true stories I ever heard of child rearing. thanks, Eddie
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

thank you,

It's so nice to hear from you again bud! truth and honesty is hard to come by these day, most people hide the truth behind mounts of words and we must dig like archeologist to find what is true. thanks for stopping by to read and commenting. your bud always, Eddie
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 6 months ago

OK, so it’s now, what,

OK, so it's now, what, 10:26 PM my time...I have spent an hour going over this poem again and again...every time I read it another feeling or idea unfolds from your words. I will not give any criticism, as it has all already been covered by others in their comments... ...but what a marvellous write. Respectfully, Jim
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Jim,

I consider the fact that you spend a hour contemplating my poem, one of the highest honors I have ever received. I'd like to say something profound, but I am at a loss by your comment. I am totally speechless. thanks so very much!! Eddie
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Hey Barbara,

It's always nice to here from you. Glad you enjoyed the message. love, Eddie