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Nov 02, 2008
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Awakened!
Hush, hush, go back to sleep,
return to the darkness where
you sleep,
close your eyes do not see,
if you see the hate you'll want
to feed,
return to your hidden lair
creature of the dark,
I can feel you in my gut twisting,
turning, tying knots, knots you
use to climb,
to cloud a mind and bring the dark,
sinister thoughts invade my mind,
that lead to the most inhuman
crimes,
that seed was planted from the
outside, they didn't know or realize
the monster I have hidden inside,
so here it is, that which was created
from circumstances and a place of
love and war,
now you'll learn that the sword is
mightier than the words!
return to the darkness where
you sleep,
close your eyes do not see,
if you see the hate you'll want
to feed,
return to your hidden lair
creature of the dark,
I can feel you in my gut twisting,
turning, tying knots, knots you
use to climb,
to cloud a mind and bring the dark,
sinister thoughts invade my mind,
that lead to the most inhuman
crimes,
that seed was planted from the
outside, they didn't know or realize
the monster I have hidden inside,
so here it is, that which was created
from circumstances and a place of
love and war,
now you'll learn that the sword is
mightier than the words!
— Eduardo Cruz, Nov 02, 2008
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Jasmine
17 years 7 months ago
Awesome!!
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jas,
zarul
17 years 7 months ago
Whoa
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Z.
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
nice work Eddie, truly
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Anna,
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Goodness...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Hey Richard,
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie...
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie my friend
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Patty,
prayersbyPatty
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
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Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Linda,
Race_9togo
17 years 6 months ago
Awakened
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Race,
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Barb,
Barbara Writes
17 years 6 months ago
this is not just for one person
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17 years 6 months ago
Eddie
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17 years 6 months ago
Janice,
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17 years 4 months ago
Eddie,
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17 years 4 months ago
Nina,