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Oct 29, 2008
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Dark- baggage
Fleeing from that which
is unseen, hidden within
the place of unconsciousness,
driven by shadows of secrets,
undiscernible imagery from
past circumstances,
dancing in darkened rooms
without scenery or escape,
crashing into padded walls,
smiles that greet from outer
features, while really it is
darkness that prevails,
sneering and wicked laughter
heard, from deep inside an
empty well,
flowing and over flowing, from
a river of inner turmoil,
spoken words that do not help,
dragging forward all that is the
past,
in the end there's only you with
all the darkness that was pseud,
alienation is what you asked,
separation is what was gained
right until the very end.
— Eduardo Cruz, Oct 29, 2008
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Quite good Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Rett,
barbsdad2003
17 years 7 months ago
I esp. like ...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
thank you!
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Eddie...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Richard,