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Pennsylvania Drive

Night time driving.
Have the road all to myself.
I sing happily to Nitty Gritty
And drink my Starbucks slowly.
Tail lights are few.
The only sounds are music
The steady 'thup-thup' of the road.
And my fingers tapping out the beat
To Mr. Bojangles.

Coming up on a truck now
Who wishes to come into my lane.
I ease off the gas
And give the customary flippy-flip of my brights.
As they slip into place.
I smile at the silent thank you:
A quick flash of their tail lights.
We're a peaceful bunch
In the sea of red and white

Darkness fades to light
And a brilliant staining of the sky
Over York
God gets out his fingerpaints
And smears the sky with brilliant coloration.
Nicely reflected in the shimmering Susquehanna
As the city begins to come to life.
Turning off onto 501
And going through rural Lancaster county
Buggies filled with Amish
Trip-trap down the road

Sleek, chocolate horses whinny
Little puffs of steam escape their nostrils
As they trot in the morning cold
Their owners bundled up inside
Off to their destination
I pull into the drive and walk into the house
I greet my love, and my second set of parents lovingly
I'm just in time for Mother's breakfast
We chatter about our plans
Enjoying a few 'together' moments
My weekend has begun.....
— infinite_dwarf, Oct 26, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Jess,

glad you made it home to your love with no problems say hello to Jon for me. Welcome home!! thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Deigo
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

Amen…. another lovely poem

Amen.... another lovely poem on the blessings of real living... Thank you. May you and yours walk in the sun all your days. ~A
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

I liked this one. Your words are so descriptive that I could see the horses and the steam of their nostrils. I too like the signals that we give each other when we are driving.... unspoken... its ok to move over in the new lane. Patty
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 7 months ago

You painted a perfect morning

without a pallette, paintbrush or knife. Lovely! ****************************************** But if wishes were horses, I’d have a ranch come on and give me another chance. @****** Lucinda Williams *******@
Mark

Mark

17 years 7 months ago

I learned

to hate driving LOL but when the time and circumstances are right I can still "feel it" that quiet easy going rolling mood. Smooth reading Jess, an enjoyable poem. Mark Man thinks this.
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Jasmine

17 years 7 months ago

Quite amazing

Felt like I was driving along with you...great rhythm...drawn into words Jasmine