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Oct 23, 2008
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One Nation Under God ~ an acrostic
Oftentimes hated
Nevertheless created
Even though some prefer obliterated
No one is better than another
Although many think they are
Toils and turmoils
Indeed we've seen by far
Opened up for business 'bout 11 score and 3.
Never looking back at that Parliamentary
United states of America. is what we became
Nurturers of prosperity over time became our game
Degraded we've become
Enchanted among the rest
Remarkably, some even still call us the best
Great bald eagle still flies proudly
Once again, I have to say
Disgruntled as I may be, God bless the USA!
Nevertheless created
Even though some prefer obliterated
No one is better than another
Although many think they are
Toils and turmoils
Indeed we've seen by far
Opened up for business 'bout 11 score and 3.
Never looking back at that Parliamentary
United states of America. is what we became
Nurturers of prosperity over time became our game
Degraded we've become
Enchanted among the rest
Remarkably, some even still call us the best
Great bald eagle still flies proudly
Once again, I have to say
Disgruntled as I may be, God bless the USA!
— infinite_dwarf, Oct 23, 2008
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Critiques
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Jess
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Jess-- wow I love this
Lonnie
17 years 7 months ago
Loved It!
IKnowNoBox
17 years 7 months ago
The Acrostic form well utilized
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Thx all
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie
deelilah
17 years 7 months ago
Patriotism
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Deeliah
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
Life, Liberty
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Tom
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Jess K
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Barb
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 7 months ago
Great bald eagle still flies
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
RM
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Jess, America is the most evil nation in the would
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
There are many gods,
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
Green with envy
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
oh silly boy!
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Also with the biggest international debt
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Go on, deny it.
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Damn it, Elf....
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
true
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
America does NOT wage war
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
silly boy.
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
Here we go again... This list is flawed
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Okay boys, take it to the room where we can all three debate
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
OK! lets talk.
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
of course Jess
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I attack evil, America just happens to come into it.
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Jess K.
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks, Rett
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Children, CHILDREN!
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
Sorry Jess K. and Rett
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I surrended nothing
pinksheep
17 years 7 months ago
It
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
facetious?
pinksheep
17 years 7 months ago
I
pinksheep
17 years 7 months ago
sorry
pinksheep
17 years 7 months ago
I
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
Pinksheep
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Directed at Pinksheep
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Decided to write now on
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Rett I am scared now…
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
LOL Interesting Anna
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
LOL Interesting Anna
Cindy Lou
17 years 5 months ago
Disgruntled.