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Basking In The Calm

I survey my world while comfortably
stretched out in my chair - I turn to the right.
My love is curled up on the couch, face relaxed
A slight smile.
Buried in a book - reading himself off into the world of firepower.
Our paperwork and relocation is taken care of.
There's nothing left to panic over.
I turn to the left.
Jai-ja is happily polishing tuna gravy off her whiskers.
Her thunderous purr is the only sound in the room
Occasionally interrupted by a page being turn.

Our living room looks like a warehouse.
Bins stacked neatly all over.
Ready to be shoveled into a truck.
Our worldly possessions meticulously labeled.
Waiting for action.
The upstairs is sparkling and clean.
And will remain unused.

We know soon, the flurry of activity will resume.
Moving, unpacking, paperwork.
Getting our affairs in order.
The bustling of work.
School every day.
And both of us stretched to the max.
In hopes for future gain.
A springtime union will continue to be planned.
But for now, we bask in the calm.

As if being pulled.
I look back over to the right.
Our eyes meet
And we smile.
Because we know we got it right this time.
And for the first time ever.
We're on the same page.
Filled with confidence, and hope
That everything is going to be all right.....
— infinite_dwarf, Oct 17, 2008

About This Poem

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Jess,

I agree, that when everything falls into place. there's a peace so good that you wish it won't end. well then there's the start of craziness all over again. Hey it great that your packed and ready to go. Here's wishing that it all goes smooth. thanks, Eddie
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 7 months ago

Oh… this brings back

Oh... this brings back memories! It's not easy to write every-day events, into poems.. Nicely done! And remember life is the balance between the imbalances. Enjoy and blessings on your new journey! ~A
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rider68

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

This is a lovely moment, I love writing seen through the eyes of the writer moments penned, for everlasting, reminds me of a song....."Pack up your troubles in an old kit bag" But your Packing for a new start and a new beginning, and i wish the very best for new starts and beginnings, Peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

I like this, felt like I was in the room hearing the cat lick her whiskers and purr I spent a lot of time in my life and I hated being "bookless" always had to have one This is a poem that makes one feel cozy and at rest. Very nice Patty
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orgami

17 years 7 months ago

the fed of the hunger

eyes turning pages whiskers being tasted i wonder and i wonder as in this is a cool poem what the author is consuming maybe its me realizing about Needs about planning them gathering them hunting them nurturing them your poem is a nice read I love long poems and Love Stories and sorties
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

~O

The author was consumed by all the stress and uncertainty for the past month! I've give you a short synopsis - Jon's contract was up, and we were waiting for IBM in New York to sign their final contract allowing Jon's company to transfer 2 people up there. After that was done, we were waiting for Jon's company to put a relocation agreement in writing. All of that paperwork was just finished. The relo is a done deal - now we can sign a lease in New York, and officially move. He starts back up there the 27th, but has to be up there this week to train several people on a safety class. The "calm" that I was referring to, was the fact that all the paperwork is done, and there's nothing left to worry about. I'll do a blog entry on what happens next - it would take far too much space to put it here in the comments section. :~) ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"It is better to be thought of a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt..." - Mark Twain
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 7 months ago

Thanks all!!

Thank you everyone for such nice comments. It's a pretty daunting task making sure that everything falls into place correctly. We should have a lease signed by the end of the week - next week at the latest, and then it's show time! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"It is better to be thought of a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt..." - Mark Twain
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poewriter58

17 years 7 months ago

Jess

What can I say , this poem is just so beautiful . I can picture it. I am so glad you and Jon are happy. It reflects in your writing Love you Mom
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 7 months ago

Congrats!!

You go Girl!! great job. Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose de Deigo
Rett

Rett

17 years 7 months ago

Well, better late than never...

Must have missed it my friend, I can only say AWESOME! I hate moving with a passion. I guess because when I was young we moved here and there. Then as a teenager I moved constantly and as an adult with the first wife I moved 3 times. With the second wife I moved 6 times before I got into this house. I told her we are NOT moving again and haven't for 27 years. *LOL* Well written and you paint the picture extremely well. Congrats on the well deserved spotlight! Respectfully, Rett: "Does this election remind you of The Emperors New Clothes? No one has the guts to tell him because..." Rett
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

Whoot!!!

Spotlight!!! Whoot!!! Congrats lady lou...wait is that me? or is that you? "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 7 months ago

Whoop there it is

Congrats on the spotlight Patty
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 7 months ago

This was a good

Well written, full of beautiful images. Congrats on spotlight. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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orgami

17 years 7 months ago

Orgami reply #2

Thank you very much for the whole meaning behind your poem It was full of the residue of so much releif and you wrote of it it is a very great poem IBM yah! I used to have an old selectric late sixties it sounded like a teletex on steroids I loved it but its gone (ooooooohhh) NEW YORK famous city never been there but it looks interesting as hell I like your poems they are very personal and full of feelings and I liked your photo of you and in the background the train (I love trains) must go now thank you