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Oct 15, 2008
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like a breeze,
The 'idea" is like a gentle
breeze that passes over me
Only to evaporate into the
singularity that is the wind,
The 'idea" is captured in a
brief moment, like a dream
that dissipates as slumber
retreats,
The 'idea" that's held and
released will fly above the
highest tree, like a wisp,
cascading into millions of
thoughts, carrying the "idea"
across the broadest sea's,
like the sea the"idea" has
depths you can not see,
To fathom it, is a scholars
dream.
just a moment is all they
need to elaborate on tons
of sheets,
like the Cosmos endless
into infinity, in the simplicity
of all "idea's.
— Eduardo Cruz, Oct 15, 2008
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whitetea
17 years 7 months ago
>
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
whitetea,
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Perhaps “In a brief
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Chrys
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Hey Patty,
purplemoondoll
17 years 7 months ago
cascading into millions
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Hey Kaz,
rider68
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Peter
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
To fathom it, is a scholars dream