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Ode To An Elf (written 10/08, but warranted reposting)

There's a phrase in the Bible.
"Seek, and ye shall find."
I've looked - and I've seen.
And it was good - surprisingly.

On the surface, first impression
Leads to a stone-faced.
Rabble rousin', short tempered
Self righteous son of a bitch
(that's said with love)

But if you take the time to look.
Strip away that exterior
And look at the man inside.
You'll see someone who writes of their cat.
Their family.
Their heart and soul.

And though we differ
I've come to respect.
That elf and his quirks.
And that's not just said
Because of the fact
That elves are bigger than dwarfs.

Write on, brother!


— infinite_dwarf, Oct 04, 2008

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Mark

Mark

17 years 8 months ago

Geeeze

What an afterthought. I'm off ROTF Give me rhythm and rock me baby ! Oh man, do I wanna get off on it !
Rett

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

Hmmm

I can't help but like that obnoxious , long haired Aussie either. But then again, I want him to loan me some of his hair. He has more than he needs and I am a little challenged there. Respectfully, Rett: "We can all be thankful that Picasso wasn't a plastic surgeon." Rett
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easylife_2

17 years 8 months ago

Good write Infinite

Its good that you you were able to look the book beyond its cover and get to really see the man inside.Thank you for this.Cheers.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

So it’s an annual thing,

So it's an annual thing, with this Weirdelf guy? Ha. Loved the last elf vs. dwarf. Hugs to you, my dwarf child (by the way, you look very tall... I'd say close to 6' am I right?) ~A
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 8 months ago

I am touched, and grinning so hard

the top of my head is lifting off like a South Park Canadian. Thank you Jess, and concurrers. Now you've blown my street cred I'm gonna have to be more obnoxious than ever, teehee. SMM enough? Lets do it again, haven't made up my mind yet [evil grin] Rett, am thinking of shaving my head come summer so let me know your address and I'll send you the clippings. cheers, Jess
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 9 months ago

So it’s an annual thing,

So it's an annual thing, with this Weirdelf guy? Ha. Loved the last elf vs. dwarf. Hugs to you, my dwarf child (by the way, you look very tall... I'd say close to 6' am I right?) ~A
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

16 years 9 months ago

Lol, Anna!

Very close, 5'10". That's one of the reasons I chose my screen name - it's a complete paradox on several levels. Hugs back my shivering friend...y'all get frost yet? ~Jess K. ----------------------- "You must cut down the mightiest tree in the forest with.....a herring!" - The Knights who say Ekky-ekky-ekky-ekky-p'kang-zoop-boing-g'dem-zoo-owli-zhiv!... and formally.... Ni!