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Oct 04, 2008
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Ode To An Elf (written 10/08, but warranted reposting)
There's a phrase in the Bible.
"Seek, and ye shall find."
I've looked - and I've seen.
And it was good - surprisingly.
On the surface, first impression
Leads to a stone-faced.
Rabble rousin', short tempered
Self righteous son of a bitch
(that's said with love)
But if you take the time to look.
Strip away that exterior
And look at the man inside.
You'll see someone who writes of their cat.
Their family.
Their heart and soul.
And though we differ
I've come to respect.
That elf and his quirks.
And that's not just said
Because of the fact
That elves are bigger than dwarfs.
Write on, brother!
— infinite_dwarf, Oct 04, 2008
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Critiques
Mark
17 years 8 months ago
A noble community must include the noble elf and noble dwarf
Mark
17 years 8 months ago
Geeeze
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Hmmm
Mark
17 years 8 months ago
And I cut mine off
easylife_2
17 years 8 months ago
Good write Infinite
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
So it’s an annual thing,
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
I am touched, and grinning so hard
Kailashana
16 years 9 months ago
So it’s an annual thing,
infinite_dwarf
16 years 9 months ago
Lol, Anna!