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Happy Birthday, Jai!

Seems like just yesterday
You were a tiny kitten.
Alone and scared.
You peered up at me, and mewed.
From within the shelter’s cage.

You got yourself in all kinds of mischief.
Leading climbing expeditions up the drapery.
Knocking over plants.
Attacking my toes under the covers.
And helping yourself to my food!

Now you’re grown.
Seven years have gone by now.
And you’re still just as cute as before.
Your purrs comfort.
And warm the soul.

Some say you’re spoiled.
And they’re right.
We wouldn’t have it any other way.
So, happy birthday, little ‘un.
In our heart you’ll always stay….

— infinite_dwarf, Sep 26, 2008

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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Rett

Rett

17 years 8 months ago

A pet is a pet til part of the family

And they tend to become part of it very quickly. Well done Jess. Respectfully, Rett: "The only thing observable with the naked eye to exceed the speed of light is rumor" Unknown
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

17 years 8 months ago

Jess K.

The beauty and mannerism of Jai is captured in this lines. Thank you for sharing this birthday message to your pet. It brings out the good heart in you. It also reminds me of our kitten hiding behind the pavement to startle the chicken and then it chased its tiny tail in a circle. Best wishes. T.
Mark

Mark

17 years 8 months ago

Jai is so lucky

My rescue story is so sad so not for here. But Cheers for Jai ! Mark Old bandits are really young rascals.
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 8 months ago

I liked this one Jess

I liked the line "your purrs comfort and warm the soul" Pets are so good for us. If people treated us like our pets treat us, this world would be a better place. Patty Pet fanatic
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 8 months ago

Jess

I liked the flow on this one. Very nice write. You deserve the 5 stars