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Aug 30, 2008
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Forbidden Language
The words you'll hear
will not be liquid gold,
but will assault and
penetrate your very soul.
Then you'll know how far
you'll go to hear my special
rapture.
I do see the fear
you have for words
you can not understand,
but if by chance you want to
learn the words of my
forbidden language.
Please come to me
and I will free you, from
all your worldly bondage.
So take from me all you can
and use it to escape,
the ones who use their practised
words to try and always woo you.
So look to me so you can hear
a true substantial language.
And when we're done,
you'll know the words
that bring the love,
you always have deserved.
— Eduardo Cruz, Aug 30, 2008
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Critiques
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Really Good writing
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 9 months ago
fobidden language
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 9 months ago
fobidden language
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Eduardo...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 9 months ago
comprehend
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
I agree...
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 9 months ago
forbidden language
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Eduardo...
Poetic Fluffer
17 years 9 months ago
Intresting piece
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 9 months ago
will be "heard" or "seen"
whitetea
17 years 8 months ago
>
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
thought
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Jess.
Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
You know what,
Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
No,No!!!!
Rett
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Rett,
Arrow
17 years 8 months ago
You deserve all the compliments you've received
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
I hear you!!
Arrow
17 years 8 months ago
I've heard the courses
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Dead on,
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Please,
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
All equals
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Barbara,
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Oh my let me finsh it and publish tommorrow
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Yes!!
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Eduardo I like your poem
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
never mumbo-jumbo from someone as eloquent as you
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Patty,
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Chrys,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Jeez this is weird
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I'm not sick, but I'm not well
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Gimme a break