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Aug 13, 2008
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What is life? LOVE or money? (revised)
What is life?For some people its LOVE ... Caring for each other,supporting each otherwriting poems to each other,
expressing all the romance
all the tenderness
a soul can treasure.
Its expressing
all the understanding
for each other's problems.Watching a Santa Monicasunset togetherholding hands,two hearts beating togethertwo souls feelingso warmly for each other...
Watching the slimmer of the moon
slowly rising over the mountaintops
and shivering from emotion and tears...
Its sharing dreams, hopes
for a future forever together.
Its bringing breakfast to bed
or thinking for ages
for the ideal gift
for your loved one...Bringing home a dozen rosesfor no special occasionjust because one thought of the other.Of the love, the care, the supportthe warmth, the beautiful kindnessone has offered to one another... For some people it is money... Is it owning a beautiful Porscheis it vacationing in Saint Tropezis it living in Beverly Hillsis it buying a Van Cleef necklace for your wifeis it owning a hugecollection of Hermes ties??? People are free,people make their own free choices...
Perhaps a clever
combination of both is ideal.
As long as one never forgets
that its not a Bulgari watch
or a Fifth Avenue home
that will hold your hand
and share your soul
in happy or destitute times...
Its your loving soulmate that will do that....
People choose their own path in life...
expressing all the romance
all the tenderness
a soul can treasure.
Its expressing
all the understanding
for each other's problems.Watching a Santa Monicasunset togetherholding hands,two hearts beating togethertwo souls feelingso warmly for each other...
Watching the slimmer of the moon
slowly rising over the mountaintops
and shivering from emotion and tears...
Its sharing dreams, hopes
for a future forever together.
Its bringing breakfast to bed
or thinking for ages
for the ideal gift
for your loved one...Bringing home a dozen rosesfor no special occasionjust because one thought of the other.Of the love, the care, the supportthe warmth, the beautiful kindnessone has offered to one another... For some people it is money... Is it owning a beautiful Porscheis it vacationing in Saint Tropezis it living in Beverly Hillsis it buying a Van Cleef necklace for your wifeis it owning a hugecollection of Hermes ties??? People are free,people make their own free choices...
Perhaps a clever
combination of both is ideal.
As long as one never forgets
that its not a Bulgari watch
or a Fifth Avenue home
that will hold your hand
and share your soul
in happy or destitute times...
Its your loving soulmate that will do that....
People choose their own path in life...
— dsaranti, Aug 13, 2008
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Critiques
Darya
17 years 9 months ago
What if you drive with your
t. reflexion
17 years 9 months ago
A balance of the two