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Co-existence

Often, I will ponder and philosophize the state of man.
We call ourselves superior, because we have come up with technology.
There are hundreds of languages and dialects - all which can be learned.
And thus understood; translated by us humans.
We see this as proof.
I sit looking out my patio door.
Eating my dinner consisting of a being that we've delegated
as a lower life form.

Menial.  Fit for our consumption; because we are so much better.
As I eat, I watch the many different life forms all dining in the same area.
There is a chipping sparrow perched on one edge of the seed bowl.
A cardinal on the other.  A squirrel is nearby, also munching.
All three creatures of different kingdoms peacefully co-existing.
The cardinal is not at war with the sparrow because she is brown and not red like him.
The squirrel doesn't care that these two little beings have feathers instead of fur.
And none of them care that all of them don't speak the same language!

Imagine that our world were like this scene out back.
We put aside our differences, and share.
These critters provide us with such an intelligent lesson.
But we don't heed them and follow their example.
We're too busy reveling in our superiority.
Sad, as we have much to learn....





edit: 08/06 7:18.  I was a dork, and left out an important sentence...
— infinite_dwarf, Aug 06, 2008

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Region, Country: North Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.A. Poe, Lewis Carroll, Charles Bukowski, Michael McClure, Lawrence Ferlenghetti.

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DarkinAZ

17 years 10 months ago

I would love ...

To have a big ol' steak, with maybe a couple pieces of some tenderly cooked bird and a side of veggies....maybe even a squirrel, mushroom and pepper kabob with it. Keep feeding 'em those seeds and nuts and fatten'n them up. Please pass the pepper! I do believe we ate them before technology, it is one of our deepest primal instincts. Technology has bestowed upon us, quite the unfair advantage though. Very cleaver write... and such a beautiful sight outside your window. Sincerely, Mark
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

I watch the squirrels play, the birds,

I have a bird feeder and bath, although they seem to prefer my little waterfall and pond. I have the skunks, the armadillos, the raccoons etc, that come into my yard. This poem was very good and very peaceful although the worms and bugs wouldn't think so. *L* The other night I was watching the moon and out of nowhere and without a sound a beautiful white and brown Owl came out of nowhere and grabbed a mouse. The only sound was one squeak and a couple of wing flaps. One day I was watching the birds, we have some doves that come around, and one flew up and POW, a rain of feathers as it was hit by a Hawk. A blink of the eye and it was gone. Nature is beautiful to watch, but don't let the peacefulness of it fool you, it can be vicious with no warning. That doesn't change the fact that this is a very beautiful write and we could learn a great deal from the scene you saw. Wouldn't it be marvelous? Respectfully, Rett: "Life is like a beach. Salty, gritty, somewhat fishy and at other times, downright crabby!" Rett 2008.
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 10 months ago

An intelligent, caring and thoughtful poem,

you raise many of the issues that concern me about our human arrogance. I partly blame the Bible "thou shalt have dominion over the birds and the beasts". There are also undertones of the Tower of Babel. Love the title. Please don't call yourself a dork, I can call you names and apologise but you should know better. My only crit, and it is slight, is that it lacks a certain poetic quality in terms of scansion and use of language. Perhaps that is the way it needs to be. It is not didactic but it is saying a profound truth so transcends poetic requirements. cheers, Jess
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Wow!! This morning when I

Wow!! This morning when I was doing my daily walk/run along my Beloved Parkway, I was making the same observation again. With one slight difference. All creatures are *territorial*, creating boundaries that they *guard*. Man, with his *superiority* still has not relinquished this lower nature. In fact is consistently devoted to *protect* its *imaginary* borders at the possible cost of nuclear annihilation. I wrote a letter to my Middle East Peace Forum which I will soon share. Love Always. Peace Now. ~A p.s. thank you for this poem. ID. You remind me of me when I was young sans the great poetry. (that didn't come till I was 27 and then lay dormant until a few years ago.) Hope you don't mind my saying that. pps the dorkiness is an endearing factor.... ask my family and friends. sometimes it's my only saving grace ;-)
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

Great metaphor!

You chose wisely. Lessons abound in every direction. All we need do is look, notice, listen, hear, etc. (I esp. like---and agree with---weirdelf's comment above.) I also appreciate your final line. You know. The one with the dork in it. Thanx, Chuck PS: My eyes locked on chipping. Do you mean to say chirping? or chipping?
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Chuck… “I also

Chuck... "I also appreciate your final line. You know. The one with the dork in it." Much like the Divine Fool/Clown, eh? i was a fool once and then i overcame the urgency to prove otherwise ;-) ~Anna
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Meant chipping

I guess I should capitalize it, as it's a breed title. the Chipping Sparrow basically looks like a little chipmunk with wings. It has the same coloration and similar stripe patterning. ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Just 'cause you have one, doesn't mean you need to be one....."
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

Thanx ...

for enlightenment. Icon use all icon get in that respect. Dint know ova chipping sparrow. I gist thought they Mosley chirpt. Despite their gesticular markin's, I'd likely call 'em chirpin' sparrows ... you know, mebbe like scoldin' squirrels or p'raps buzzin' busy bees. But then I'm not the namer. At lease not a fishially. (And cannot imagine Y not.) Yours, Chuck
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks all!

Mark - You're not going to eat my wildlife! Besides that's Jai-ja's TV. Glad you liked. Rett - I agree, a couple of the other birds get fussy with other birds about; particularly the blue jays. It's hysterical watching the purple finches and cardinals eat, because they peep at the same time, and seed falls out of their beak. Jess T. - Agreed with the format, I was very torn on posting this as a blog instead of a poem, and might move it. Will wait and see what others say. Thanks for your thoughts. Anna - Great minds think alike. LOL! It's so peaceful just walking around and observing nature as it's intended to be. Chuckles - Hey what good is life if you can't poke fun at yourself. I still can't believe I totally omitted that line, though, as the poem would have made no sense without it! Much appreciated! ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "Just 'cause you have one, doesn't mean you need to be one....."