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Jul 08, 2008
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i CARE ABOUT YOU
I care about you...
I care that you arrive
safely in your new found country
the United States.
I care that you love it
and that you make it your new home.
I care that you excel at your new School
the Harvard Business School.
I care that you distinguish yourself
and that you achieve the honor
of becoming a Baker Scholar.
I care that you make the
right decision of pursuing
the appropriate career for you
being in Academics
or being in Business.
But most of all I CARE
that you find the right man in your life.
A man who will care about you with all his might.
A man who will not only care about your incredible beauty
about your splendid blue eyes
about your incredibly sharp mind
about your determination and solid drive.
But mostly I CARE that you find the right man
who will love you and TAKE CARE OF YOU.
Who will care for your inner world.
For your heart and soul...
For your gentle tenderness,
for your so sensitive romantic feelings
for your maturity and for your outstanding judgment.
For your caring and gentle feelings for others.
YOU, my Elaine deserve a MAN
who will truly care for YOU.
Who will always shower you with gifts and flowers
every Christmas, every birthday every special occasion...
Or who will just simply send you twenty one
beautiful red roses on any day
just for being the special, distinguished person
that you are: Elaine.
You deserve a man who will lean over your shoulder
every moment of the day and CARE about all your problems
whether they be from work
or whether they be your innermost, most sensitive sensibilities.
A man who will hug you, hold you in his strong arms,
keep you safe day and night.
Tender you with kisses,
make you feel like the Princess that you really are.
Love you gently, love you softly, love you tenderly,
like you so much deserve.
I CARE about you Elaine, very much so...
I want you to find the right man who will CARE about you
who will truly CARE about you night and day
with all his mind, heart and soul.
You're a very special, outstanding, distinguished person Elaine.
You deserve a MAN who will roll out the red carpet of roses for YOU,
day and night, every week, every month, every year.
Don't settle for anything less, ever...
I care that you arrive
safely in your new found country
the United States.
I care that you love it
and that you make it your new home.
I care that you excel at your new School
the Harvard Business School.
I care that you distinguish yourself
and that you achieve the honor
of becoming a Baker Scholar.
I care that you make the
right decision of pursuing
the appropriate career for you
being in Academics
or being in Business.
But most of all I CARE
that you find the right man in your life.
A man who will care about you with all his might.
A man who will not only care about your incredible beauty
about your splendid blue eyes
about your incredibly sharp mind
about your determination and solid drive.
But mostly I CARE that you find the right man
who will love you and TAKE CARE OF YOU.
Who will care for your inner world.
For your heart and soul...
For your gentle tenderness,
for your so sensitive romantic feelings
for your maturity and for your outstanding judgment.
For your caring and gentle feelings for others.
YOU, my Elaine deserve a MAN
who will truly care for YOU.
Who will always shower you with gifts and flowers
every Christmas, every birthday every special occasion...
Or who will just simply send you twenty one
beautiful red roses on any day
just for being the special, distinguished person
that you are: Elaine.
You deserve a man who will lean over your shoulder
every moment of the day and CARE about all your problems
whether they be from work
or whether they be your innermost, most sensitive sensibilities.
A man who will hug you, hold you in his strong arms,
keep you safe day and night.
Tender you with kisses,
make you feel like the Princess that you really are.
Love you gently, love you softly, love you tenderly,
like you so much deserve.
I CARE about you Elaine, very much so...
I want you to find the right man who will CARE about you
who will truly CARE about you night and day
with all his mind, heart and soul.
You're a very special, outstanding, distinguished person Elaine.
You deserve a MAN who will roll out the red carpet of roses for YOU,
day and night, every week, every month, every year.
Don't settle for anything less, ever...
— dsaranti, Jul 08, 2008
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Barbara Writes
17 years 11 months ago
This is really good