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Marius Surleac
Marius Surleac
Jun 25, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Epigram 3 - of a couple

Husband and wife sleeping in bed:
he dreams she’s hot model;
she thinks he’s a cupid,
with big arrows ahead

— Marius Surleac, Jun 25, 2008

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

18 years 1 month ago

Marius

The last two sentences actually say more than I think most will realize.... it's a wishing, almost a sadness. A hope that things will get better. Hot models aren't all they're cracked up to be.... think of how they're going to look 30 years down the road. :~) ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Everyone needs to believe in something. I believe I'll have another beer!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine!"
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

18 years 1 month ago

Hi Jess!It could be seen

Hi Jess! It could be seen like that too, but my intention was to create a funny moment though. Thank you very much! Cheers, Marius
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years ago

funny

poignant, poignant and shyly carnal, love it. cheers, Jess

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