Betrayal (acrostic)

cheers, Jess

now that is writing it down... excellent Frost ! Richard

Excellent acrostic here, Frost. Have definitely been in those shoes before, and you did a good job expressing what it feels like. ~Jess K. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "You name me, entertain Thoughts of peace can overcome anything Mirror spins; wicked tales Here lies reflections of, deceptions of...." - Overjoyed (Jars of Clay)

Excellent example of an acrostic Chrystalie

It really is, Frost ! Mark

In a venomous way it is ... ;-) venomous vengeance forever engulfs a diabolical trinity newly established graciously salaciously gratuitously engraves itself upon it namesake and never understanding common bonds ends in two graves. Death marks its spot. Great poem Frost, thanks for the inspiration... Haven't done one of these in ages. Love ya, Anna

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Sincerely, Mark

I am a bit reserved about the ending line though.. left nothing to rebuild... "left lies in your wake" Left without honor... over all though a topic that really relates to my current study.. I have been thinking of challenging you with a multi word phrase acrostic.. I believe you could pull one off. In ink, Dabbler

wonderful acrostic Frost. Stabs write (right) to the point and to the gut. Nowhere left to hide. Good work writer. Yours, Frangipangi "Good things happen when you meet strangers". Yo-Yo Ma

Never tried one of these, looks like fun. Kindly intervention Increasing chances of survival Concerning vengeance Killing is never the Answer, though Stinging retorts are Some say I really liked it and if a reference to something that happed to you, my sympathies. I've been there. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.

good job, good write. Sincerely, Mark

As I have begun to grow, and develop skills, which to now, has never been tapped or explored prior to joining this community, I can confidently say that something written so poignantly as this fine example of acrostics, is a great example, well understood, brilliantly delivered, and in times Past, I have painfully been at the receiving end, Great work…… Very Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

Who hasn't been (or felt) betrayed? It's an experience we all have in common as human beings. For some it's a killing field. ~A

The second acrostic poem I read on the site. Great imagery and deep sensations, all these lead by "betrayal" Good job Frost! Sincerely, Marius

Mel Inwood Butterfly's in my stomach Lusting over him In his own world So fine... So devine! I have NO idea what acroustic is but how did I go?