Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Jun 14, 2008
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
Why I love my Elaine
Her hands are so fine and elegant,her skin is so soft;her face is as prettyas the most beautiful, blooming rose;her eyes are stunningly blue,the clear, radiant deep blueof the Mediterranean seaunder the bright, vivid July sun.She's refined, distinguished,she is quite simplya really beautiful woman. She's extremely bright,she's dynamic,she's an achiever.
Yet her soul is tender as silk
gentle as an Autumn breezeHer soul is fullof kindness and caringof support and tenderness.Her gorgeous inner world
is like a marvelous love poem.Its full of romanticism
full of magic dreams
its full of wonderful thoughtsfull of the most gentle sensitivity
the most enchanting feelings.
That's my Elaine.She offers me loveshe offers me careshe holds my hand firmlywhen the going gets tough.She' given me so much.She's givena completely new meaningto my life. I know she will always stand by meas I will always stand by my Elaine,my most precious red rose. We will always stand togetherno matter what difficultiesfate brings us,no matter how hard the times.We're just too precious for each other
Yet her soul is tender as silk
gentle as an Autumn breezeHer soul is fullof kindness and caringof support and tenderness.Her gorgeous inner world
is like a marvelous love poem.Its full of romanticism
full of magic dreams
its full of wonderful thoughtsfull of the most gentle sensitivity
the most enchanting feelings.
That's my Elaine.She offers me loveshe offers me careshe holds my hand firmlywhen the going gets tough.She' given me so much.She's givena completely new meaningto my life. I know she will always stand by meas I will always stand by my Elaine,my most precious red rose. We will always stand togetherno matter what difficultiesfate brings us,no matter how hard the times.We're just too precious for each other
— dsaranti, Jun 14, 2008
Share this poem
Critiques
purplemoondoll
17 years 11 months ago
Recently there have been
purplemoondoll
17 years 11 months ago
PS
dsaranti
17 years 11 months ago
thank you!!!