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The Happiest Moment !!!

His heart fluttered,he trembled,he shook.As if lightning had struck,this incredible feelingof warmth,of divine pleasureovertook him.In split seconds,at the speed of lighta myriad of sentimentsfilled his trembling heart.Yes it was joy, it was bliss,it was ecstasy, it was exhilaration.Yes it was divine delightand it was pure nirvana.Yes it was heavenand it was paradise. He felt like a proud eagle flying sky highwith all his splendorand with all his might. He felt blazing and merryflying in heavenlike a little, innocent kidgetting his first bikeas his birthday present.  Yes, it was truethe letter on the screenwas "E".She was calling himin full dangerof getting caught. Yes, he knew it:SHE LOVED HIM!!! Yes, he knew it.These werethe most rare, the most preciousof moments... Those momentsthat shapethe beauty, the magic of life...  
— dsaranti, Jun 13, 2008

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago

Really Good

Smiles:) Barbara I enjoyed the flight. Flying the steel birds though never been in one or plan to. Enjoyable none the less. At the end I see love describe liken to first flying lesson one can experience. I heard it is awesome, but as said earlier don't plan to experience, but here in your poem my imagination was enough. Soaring the skies in my mind and it feels great. Really good job.