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Come To Me

Come to me my rose,
Let's consume the morning
Tease, taste our solemn vows,
Dig  it's treasured meaning,

Come as swiftly as the wind,
Plunge me to our dreams,
Entwine our breathe and mend,
Our hearts our thoughts and aims,

Come to me, homing pigeon ,
Dwell inside my heart,
It's yours and you alone,
Resides here from the start,

Come to me my  molly,
Come let's tease the sun,
Until he pause his flaring journey,
Zeal the love that we've done,

— josephlil, Jun 11, 2008

Critiques

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DarkinAZ

18 years 1 month ago

I enjoyed this...

...very much. I especially like the first stanza. Sincerely, Mark

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