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What brings us to love...
It was the magic veil of fate that made
our life paths cross ever so happily,
but it is what bonds us so strongly together
that makes us live so very lovingly.
We trust each other:
We share each other’s secrets easily,
candidly and openly,
we love each other in our own, very special way;
we adore each other ever so amorously.
We care for each other:
whether when she cares about
his "special problem" with deep concern;
or whether when he strives to help
with any of her problems,
even when they’re so difficult to discern.
We ever so often sacrifice for each other
without a second thought, it just give us pleasure
It’s part of our love, its part of our friendship,
its part of our caring, it’s something we treasure.
Valuing honesty above every other meaning,
being always candid to each other,
we are always truthful, open and frank even when
it might hurt our relationship in some manner.
We both believe that whatever difficulties
the magic veil of fate might ever bring along our way
we will both keep our special friendship growing
forever and ever and in every possible way !!!
We both try to listen to each other’s thoughts,
and whenever possible try to change course.
We both reveal our passions
and manage to disclose every single
little aspect of these same emotions
that lead to improvement and enhancement
if not to the very actual solutions.
We are both perfectionists but know
that we have a long way to go through excellence,
We are spiritually motivated… we are driven…
we are ambitious… we are determined…
but at the same time we are compassionate for others…
we care… we are always concerned…
We know of all our faults and try
to resolve them in a humble, modest way
we know we’re only humans and that God will guide us in his own, special way
Critiques
RSScheerer
18 years ago
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