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Ivory

There must be a place
where poems go to die
like weeping elephants
making that long, slow
sacred journey

tusk after
forlorn tusk
solemnly wait

bold thieves
hunt
desecrate a dark
and holy ground,

and someone, somewhere
will surely pick up the remains of this poem
and carry off a word or two
on bent back,
ready to carve a fragrant
and trumpeting memory.
— Kailashana, Apr 04, 2008

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professor

professor

18 years 2 months ago

Not like you this...

Its a sad, beautiful poem Anna with extended Elephant imagery...one of the most fascinating species on earth i might add. Would that they were completely protected from the illegal ivory trade. Poems just die from not being read, indeed they are only really alive when they are read. I have no suggested changes, not even line breaks. lol. Keith
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abrelosojos

18 years 2 months ago

loved the first and last

loved the first and last stanzas :) very beautifully written! fragile things: take flight!