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Mar 20, 2008
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Ode To The Toilet-bowl I Flushed My Dead Goldfish Down
Returning
Once again
To the pools from whence you came
God’s throne accepts your soul
And allows your finished body
To rest
Among the waste of a physical world.
The moment has passed.
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— Alobar, Mar 20, 2008
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poewriter58
18 years 2 months ago
not
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
I tried growing goldfish
orgami
18 years 2 months ago
concrete Styx
Alobar
18 years 2 months ago
Thank you, yours too. This