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Fantasy
I walk into the Forest the sun feel like a million little kisses on my face and arms. "MMM... the feels so good." I whispered with my eyes closed. I hear a twig snap then another one and another... I open my eyes but no one is around. So, I slip my pale pink silk dress off, let the sun sun kiss my naked body. "mmm.. so good." I murmured, as i walk in further into the Forest. I hear someone giggle. I looked and saw two women watching me. One with crimson colored hair, the bluest eyes I've ever seen, skin so pale you can see her veins. The other one had brownish blond hair, moss green eyes and a tan. The one with crimson hair spoke while lifting her left hand, "Hello, I'm Violet and this is Rose." when she finished talking she put her index finger to my cheek then down to my bottom lip. I flicked my tongue over her finger then drew it in. She tasted salty but yet sweet at the same time.Rose started to caress my breast with feather light touches. Violet removes her finger from her mouth and tugs my hair as my head rolls back she kisses,nibbles and sucks my neck. Rose pushes me back into the tree gently. Violet made her way to my breast while Rose to my cunt, she used her index and thumb to push back my lips then began to lick,suck and nip my clit. just when i was about to climax she pulls back a little, i grab her silky hair and push her forward in a silent plea begged her to continue this incredible attack on me. Violet made her way upward to me mouth. After a moment or two my legs give out, and I'm on the floor; waiting for my breathing to slow down. I drift to sleep. when I woke up Violet and Rose where gone.
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Sirens Serenade
18 years 4 months ago
not for me I'm afraid
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18 years 4 months ago
Sirens Serenade
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