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Huntsville Water Treatment Plant 1990
Pulling nails with the Estwing
drop it into the metal holder
the work belt with Tape
measure The nail pouch
in that beautiful fresh
tanned leather
Love the feel of it when i
swing my Kodiaks up the
work ladder on the start of the
shift
Throw that tasty smoke
on the churned up clay
and laugh with the boys
its another good day
fresh concrete and bright
pipes
electricians
and half the walls up
"Crayon" will be here in
three hours with her hot
coffee and danishs
her stainless snack
truck
i work for my carpenters
and do my job well
boss likes me
i work weekends
Carolee loves me in
work boots
I love her in her outfits
from Deerhurst
where she works
with her girls
showing business
clients packages
sitting at her desk
my mans work
dirt on my hands
dust in my hair
grit in my clothes
A different job
a different place
Chloe would run
down the hall
"Daddy"
swing her up in my
arms
smiling
smile to smile
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bayoujeanette
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