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Words......
My words,
unspoken ones,
when weighted against
personal perception (perched on
your lofty pedestal, called wholesome,
where I have placed you). Slight perversions
of you. Never seem adequate. As if
their mere utterance, somehow
would diminish, us both
I should have told you ...
Framed in the proper
light you posses a smile,
so infused with wonder,
with beauty, that Angels
weep with envy.
I should have told you....
When enveloped, adrift
on a sea of ambivalent
black hole days, my greatest
comfort. Was found nestled
in lyrical echos, of your virtuoso voice
I should have told you....
about, futuristic mental snapshots,
lighting fast, mischievous, unborn
children at play. About back
porch, comfortable silences,
sipping Iced tea.
I should have told you .....
That, I think I love you,
despite the fact that we just met,
but I couldn't find the proper
vernacular, the exact,
language of longing. I said,
"Hello", instead, and
slowly walked away.
Critiques
themoonman
18 years 5 months ago
Hi Vonne...
vonnegutfan
18 years 5 months ago
THanks agian Moon I aways
infinite_dwarf
17 years 9 months ago
Von
vonnegutfan
17 years 9 months ago
Regrets of things Unsaid
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