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The Halves of Cannine Seperate
in 82' when i was young
i had a pet that i didnt pay
attention to
So my father told me all in
all it would be better if he
gave him away
he went to a man that loved
his dogs Not some wayward
young adult as I though
we had our days this dog
and i of sitting on his rock
and he on his chain
when nights restless would
keep me awake he would
step from his little house
and sit with me
he broke away from this
new fine home and visited
the chicken man half a
mile away
and the chicken man
protected his chickens
with his double birdshot
shotgun at close range
and so it was that i was
there in the sunny sunlight
of a day dumping out the
trash of our house and home
when i saw a sight that made
me groan
there in the trash like a hunk
of junk was the black and white
end of my dear old dog
(just the back end)
I searched and I searched
but I never found
the favourite face of a once
loved hound
(the chicken man was just
doing his job)
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