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shadowed shores
here I am awash in the current underlining of the moment
the pines and balsams are unkempt and bent with wind
and the opposing forces coming in from the lake
as if its far and vast atmosphere could blast physical into
emphereal curvatures
the stones are rounded and fill the voids where sand should
be large waves are floundering in
driftwood is tangled and stacked where the blackest of
shadows meet the waters moving images
living emotion swirling and cankerous on the broken rock
the mountian above the road come down to slake its
hot thirst of a billion some years
shes lonely and hard out there
waiting for a moment to turn and hurl her breakers
high up in the branches
tear at the fabric of landscape for a few hundred miles
I am here at her gentle side
while a moon slides up from the
great purple night
and rides the waves like
great ghost horsemen
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Critiques
poewriter58
18 years 5 months ago
Oh the imagery
Taurus1970
18 years 5 months ago
I thoroughly enjoyed the
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