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Bill Brownd
Bill Brownd, was a man
Who walked this earth, and left his stamp
From the moment I met him, he was kind
He laughed when he was happy and sometimes he cried
Bill Brownd, really enjoyed life
His daughters were his pride and their children to him were grand!
Bill Brownd was a remarkable man.
He did many things, he was an officer of the law
and even helped those whom tragedy would befall.
His friends were many years known, his brother even came home
to see him on his way.
Bill brownd, such a friendly soul, I watched as his daughter cried
she never left his side, she would just sit, and hold his hand.
The angels filled the room, to carry him to the father
and just before he said goodbye, I saw God's amazing grace
Twinkle in his eyes.
Bill brownd was a man, who surely left his stamp
In our hearts!
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Kieran Nelson
18 years 5 months ago
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