Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Feb 05, 2008
⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature
A Dilatory Toast
It’s enough to know you did your best
while attempting to succeed
Anyway, winning often doesn’t bring
the things you really need
Cheer up old friend let loose a yell
You did what you could do
You got the chance to master fate
How fortunate for you
If losing in the end still stings
If living with defeat
Is more than you think you can bear
It’s not, that’s just deceit
Too often we focus on the prize
We’re all winners after all
Except the many who seldom win
just happy to be at the Ball
If life is but a game we play
And we’re acting on this stage
Enjoy the part you’ve been given
Don’t waste your life in rage
So even if the play reveals
your part’s a supporting role
be glad you’re there at curtain call
with your eyes still on your goal
— fthillsboomer, Feb 05, 2008
Share this poem
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 5 months ago
I love the love and compassion in this.
fthillsboomer
18 years 5 months ago
Thanks
Join Neopoet to leave a critique
Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.